When it comes to leads all I have to say is that it is hard to decide what should be written for the lead. Like I've stated to others is that what I feel is important may not be important to others or what is needed for a lead.
For the do's I feel that you need only the information that will catch peoples eyes and get there attention. Just get the main facts in the lead and leave the rest for the article.
Don'ts for leads are don't make it to long so you don't catch the eye of the person
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• Missing apostrophe in "people's"
• Misspelled their
• Should be "too" not "to"
• Missing period at end